Fiction, flash fiction, Members Only The Sweet Taste June 24, 2016 / 3 Comments Support me on Patreon to see this content!To unlock this content, pledge $5 or more on Patreon Unlock with Patreon
Papuasblya July 19, 2018 at 10:19 pm Reply Why did you talk about the smell, which attacks her nose, and not the taste, which invades her mouth? The betrayal would be more brutal. Loading...
Kitten Holiday July 19, 2018 at 10:40 pm Reply Good point! I don’t know. It all sounds pretty brutal to me either way but that’s certainly something to consider and maybe address in a revision. Loading...
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Anonymous
That was an amazing read, just….WOW!
Papuasblya
Why did you talk about the smell, which attacks her nose, and not the taste, which invades her mouth? The betrayal would be more brutal.
Kitten Holiday
Good point! I don’t know. It all sounds pretty brutal to me either way but that’s certainly something to consider and maybe address in a revision.